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A Different Part to Play by ~crazyeyedgirl:iconcrazyeyedgirl:



Sinful woman
Don the clothes you wish to play in
Become a different soul
play a foreign part.
Tight coiled braids
Penciled freckles
Light summer dress
And an empty wicker basket
Calling for wildflowers to overflow.
Skip upon the stage
You aren?t you anymore
You have picked a different part
You will play a young girl
Innocent and petty
The wishes of you not many.
Just play like there?s no tomorrow,
Sing like no one?s going to hear
And live as if you?d never known any sin,
But the childhood you?re playing in.
©2004-2008 ~crazyeyedgirl
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POetry class poem describing the setting of a play and a chaaracters action and dress.

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~my-soul:iconmy-soul: May 8, 2004, 4:42:09 PM
thats awesome ^.^ i love the ending cuz i dunno..it just..is cool lol. yea i know i suck at comments but yea. just know i like it lots =D

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Calvin : You can't just turn on creativity like a faucet. You have to be in the right mood.
Hobbes : What mood is that?
Calvin : Last-minute panic.

:mangapunksai: .::Ariana::. :mangapunksai:
~crazyeyedgirl:iconcrazyeyedgirl: May 10, 2004, 4:58:03 AM
Thanks Hunny.....I appreciate it ! have a great day! :hug:

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Take your wings and fly, this journey comes but once, explore everything and appreciate the good things in life.

~Lauren~
~my-soul:iconmy-soul: May 14, 2004, 3:15:47 PM
thanx, ur welcome, and u have a great day too lol ^.^

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Calvin : You can't just turn on creativity like a faucet. You have to be in the right mood.
Hobbes : What mood is that?
Calvin : Last-minute panic.

:mangapunksai: .::Ariana::. :mangapunksai:
~Silverbaneblood:iconSilverbaneblood: May 16, 2004, 9:54:34 PM
What play is it a bout???

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The golden light has gently absorbed my shadows, and left in their place a placid radiance that shines from the truth that can only be found within.
~crazyeyedgirl:iconcrazyeyedgirl: May 17, 2004, 12:50:17 PM
Wait....what ?? I dont understand.....

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Take your wings and fly, this journey comes but once, explore everything and appreciate the good things in life.

~Lauren~
~Silverbaneblood:iconSilverbaneblood: May 18, 2004, 8:49:29 PM
Didn't you write it about a girl who was acting in a play??? Or about someone who threw themselves into acting so they could forget there tainted life??? Or am I just confused???
:confused:
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The golden light has gently absorbed my shadows, and left in their place a placid radiance that shines from the truth that can only be found within.