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At the Brink of Ecstasy by ~crazyeyedgirl:iconcrazyeyedgirl:



The music is our ecstasy,
our drug.
We are at the brink of addiction,
soon to wobble and slip into
the encompassing menace.
Capturing our youth,
in a whirl of passion,
and a fountain of angst.

The high like no other,
as we sit in a dark room all alone.
Words floating through our body,
meeting our aching pain,
like no other.
A confusion, a misunderstanding,
demanding of you,
that which you can not give.

Lost, astray, far from home.
The music pulls you back to yourself,
meeting again the imminent longing,
to know who you are and where youa re going.
The notes give you the road.
and the lyrics the push to walk down it.

The voice, one of despair or one of hope,
grabs at the soul, penetrates the chagrin.
Reaches the dark corner of the mind,
threads through the cobwebs,
of feelings covered with dust.

The music listens when no one else will.
©2004-2008 ~crazyeyedgirl
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I waslistening to music late one night and thinking how it affected and was my world and my feeling..and it moved me me so...my memories and my first thoughts amd feelings were through music.

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~DarkenedWorld:iconDarkenedWorld: Apr 3, 2004, 7:49:54 AM
wow...thats amazing..i love it
~my-soul:iconmy-soul: Apr 3, 2004, 8:17:54 AM
dude this is one of ur best poems. its so very true and u captured what we think and feel about music just perfectly. i think about this too..how music has affected us in so many ways. great job hun. this is truly amazing. :clap:

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~crazyeyedgirl:iconcrazyeyedgirl: Apr 3, 2004, 9:26:37 AM
THank you much..any suggestions..i lvoe em'

:hug:

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Take your wings and fly, this journey comes but once, explore everything and appreciate the good things in life.

~Lauren~
~crazyeyedgirl:iconcrazyeyedgirl: Apr 3, 2004, 9:30:00 AM
O goodness thank you so much:D ....i like this poem too:D..i wasnt very sure how to end it though.....

:hug:

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Take your wings and fly, this journey comes but once, explore everything and appreciate the good things in life.

~Lauren~
~juliev6:iconjuliev6: Apr 3, 2004, 9:43:44 AM
ah I love this poem! it makes me feel great.. and plus this is excatly how I feel.. espeically the last line. :)

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~Silverbaneblood:iconSilverbaneblood: Apr 3, 2004, 11:14:41 AM
And people say that music has no affect on our subconscious minds! :no: I, however, beg to differ!!!!
But, great poem...I love how you describe it as an addiction...perhaps, it is...
:hmm: something to think about I suppose....

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The golden light has gently absorbed my shadows, and left in their place a placid radiance that shines from the truth that can only be found within.
~crazyeyedgirl:iconcrazyeyedgirl: Apr 3, 2004, 1:32:42 PM
I know i love it too actually...:)...im satisfied :D

:hug:

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Take your wings and fly, this journey comes but once, explore everything and appreciate the good things in life.

~Lauren~
~crazyeyedgirl:iconcrazyeyedgirl: Apr 3, 2004, 1:57:54 PM
yeha it does influence us..but it can be in agood way and it relates and helps feelings be produce and exscape..what kind of music youy listen to ??

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Take your wings and fly, this journey comes but once, explore everything and appreciate the good things in life.

~Lauren~
~Silverbaneblood:iconSilverbaneblood: Apr 4, 2004, 1:26:29 PM
Just about anything and everything--classical, alternative, jazz, those old 40's show tunes, praise and worship, atmospheric(new age-ish stuff), instramental(symphanotic, or singular) light praise, broadway show tunes. Basically wahtevers on. It really depends on my mood. I'm not to fond of hip-hop or rap, but other than that, I'll listen to just about anything... :D

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The golden light has gently absorbed my shadows, and left in their place a placid radiance that shines from the truth that can only be found within.