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Burnt Sienna Sunrise by ~crazyeyedgirl:iconcrazyeyedgirl:



The setting sun,
Making a rainbow sky,
Falling onto the water,
Reflections catch my eye.

A small town,
Chapel rising tall,
Walking to the sound,
Of the church bells as they call.

From burnt sienna to fiery red
Orange to marmalade haze,
Teal to aqua blue,
then violet to finish the maze.

The shadows of the steeple,
Hit the colored water
As the sun sets.
This is as calm as the village ever gets.

Imagining the people,
Like ants in a hill,
Looking at the drifting sky,
Wondering things we never will.
©2004-2008 ~crazyeyedgirl
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A poem I wrote in school a fewmonths ago..havent put anything in a while so i thought id do this one although its not the best.

COmments please :)

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=danielcraggs:icondanielcraggs: Jun 15, 2004, 7:56:48 AM
Mmmm very vivid colours, and a sense of looking down on all this happening. Very well constructed! :) Sorry I've not had time to speak to ya, I'm slap bang in the middle of these exams. We WILL talk soon though!! :hug:

Take care!
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~my-soul:iconmy-soul: Jun 15, 2004, 9:53:50 AM
wow thats wonderful! i love it. it gives a wonderful mental image..^.^ great job =D and srry i havent commented..i've been gone and my comp is messin up big time hehe. :hug: i still love ya tho

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~antenigma:iconantenigma: Jul 16, 2004, 5:22:35 AM
This is really good, excellent use of language!

You've got a really good talent for poetry, well done!=)

Take Care
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