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Our Last Sweet Goodbye by ~crazyeyedgirl:iconcrazyeyedgirl:



We said goodbye
Like a man on his death bed,
Mere thoughts barely escaping our lips
Fluttering eyes closing in pain,
Like the wings of a butterfly
Brushing away the hurtful memory.

I saw the green fields
And skipped through the mist
Dark sadness filled the air
And crushed the soul I had fallen into,
Like rain on a stormy night.

So many thoughts fly,
As the hurt in my eyes
Is no longer comforted,
By the one saying goodbye.

And like the old man
I inhale my last breath,
my last sight,
my last solemn memory.
As I long to hold on
But I must let go
And say my last
Sweet goodbye.
©2004-2008 ~crazyeyedgirl
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A little cliche..feel free to make comments and suggestions

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~Linkinpark788:iconLinkinpark788: May 18, 2004, 1:16:56 PM
oOoOo..pretty..like :o)
~JLaursMan21:iconJLaursMan21: May 18, 2004, 7:50:35 PM
so just say goodbye already!
and leave the old man out of it
~crazyeyedgirl:iconcrazyeyedgirl: May 19, 2004, 4:32:15 AM
ok..sorry..it was jsut a poem..but whatever....

--
Take your wings and fly, this journey comes but once, explore everything and appreciate the good things in life.

~Lauren~
~crazyeyedgirl:iconcrazyeyedgirl: May 19, 2004, 4:34:47 AM
Hey thanks..but its definitely not my best piece of work...and hellp have we met :D..Im lauren who are you??

:D

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Take your wings and fly, this journey comes but once, explore everything and appreciate the good things in life.

~Lauren~
~crazyeyedgirl:iconcrazyeyedgirl: May 25, 2004, 11:42:08 AM
You better ;)

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Take your wings and fly, this journey comes but once, explore everything and appreciate the good things in life.

~Lauren~
~my-soul:iconmy-soul: Jun 2, 2004, 4:48:22 PM
nice ^.^

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